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The Angel Inside


Hi Everyone. 

This piece was written some years back for the conscious admiration and modest perceptive of the love for the Girl Child.

It’s not easy being a woman in this muddled and pokerfaced world powered by testosterone fed junkies.

Hats off to you all for the journey you take from innocence to sheer perfection. 

Sleeping like an angel in your heart

She has been dreaming all the way.

Sing a song for the child in you

Let her know how much you care

Touch, feel, open her eyes n

wish, smile, it’s prayer time.

So, say it, your dearest wish

n She’ll make you alive, once again.

You thought the moon was beautiful,

follow her n

She’ll take you to the stars

Hold her hands, make her walk.

Her small steps, you heart will talk.

Tears, smile, don’t even try to hide.

Heart, soul, She knows all that’s inside.

So, say it, your dearest wish

n She’ll make you beam, once again.

This story is like a Fairy Tale.

Look into her eyes – your mirror is there.

All the magic n all the love.

All desired, even the heaven above

Kiss, tell, it’s all you’ve to do.

Hope, believe, She’ll take you through.

So, say it, your dearest wish

n She’ll make you blessed, once again.

When you’ll long for no more.

When you’ll feel you’ve got it all.

That night you’ll dream of her, once again.

Would feel like first kiss, the first rain.

Hold, gentler, She won’t let you go.

Love, life, is all she cares for.

So, say it, your dearest wish

n She’ll make you believe, once again.

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Categories: Poems
  1. Pawan Hira (awakeningpsyche)
    May 26, 2012 at 11:02 pm

    Oh, Impressive feelings. She will always be there to back up. Your words are beauty.

  2. May 27, 2012 at 12:01 am

    Beautiful ! you sheerly described the beauty of a woman in terms of everything,the way she cares,guides,loves,desires,stands by a man and helps him fulfill his desire and wish… like an angel…She is indeed an angel…Thanks for writing this..loved it…

    • May 27, 2012 at 12:17 am

      all of me
      in the smiles
      and bitter words

      this is where
      I did not pretend
      bound by honest cords

      Glad you liked it – just wrote my heart out. If a true woman like you compliments it – its worth !!

      • May 27, 2012 at 12:23 am

        if true words form to become a verse,
        which reflect the inner self and tears,
        there itself the poem formed,
        becomes a exceptional touching one…

      • May 27, 2012 at 12:35 am

        bows and more bows to the lady ! Thanks !

      • May 27, 2012 at 12:40 am

        welcome! 🙂

      • May 27, 2012 at 1:18 pm

        Hers is the most eligible award for you! nominating you for the commentator award…click the link for it…http://wp.me/p1Zs7k-nF

      • May 27, 2012 at 1:49 pm

        Yipeee !!!!
        I came first !!!
        FINALLY !!!
        Thanks a ton !!!

  3. May 27, 2012 at 12:43 am

    Now only a man who is in love with his daughters can write something soo beautiful!!
    Hugs. 🙂

  4. preety92
    May 27, 2012 at 1:52 pm

    I must say… this is a beautiful piece! 🙂

    • May 27, 2012 at 1:59 pm

      the strength of being a woman !! Thanks !!

      • preety92
        May 27, 2012 at 2:22 pm

        You’re welcome! 🙂

  5. May 27, 2012 at 3:08 pm

    I’m sure the woman you wrote this for must have been on the top of the world!

    Very few men seem to understand a woman so deeply. You can count yourself among them! 😀

    • May 27, 2012 at 3:35 pm

      …and that feels so genuine hearing it from a woman(girl) herself !!
      You made my day !! 🙂
      Shutti !

  6. thesubterraneanworld
    May 27, 2012 at 5:45 pm

    This is a splendid creation! Keep it Up!
    Blessings,
    -Naima.

    • May 27, 2012 at 5:50 pm

      Hey ! Thanks a ton !! I guess my comments are going into your spam !! Glad you checked !!!

      • thesubterraneanworld
        May 27, 2012 at 5:52 pm

        Oh I will check just now and I will approve of them.
        Therefore thank you for following, I will do the same!
        Blessings,
        -Naima.

      • thesubterraneanworld
        May 27, 2012 at 5:52 pm

        Oh I will check just now and I will approve of them.
        Therefore thank you for following, I will do the same!
        Blessings,
        -Naima.

  7. Ryanka
    June 12, 2012 at 5:59 pm

    This is the most beautiful poem I’ve ever read.. ❤

    • June 12, 2012 at 6:03 pm

      You are overwhelming !!
      But I won’t mind !!!! 🙂

      • Ryanka
        June 12, 2012 at 6:04 pm

        Thanks for the complement 😀

  8. Asifa Zunaidha
    June 22, 2012 at 12:24 pm

    very tender and beautiful… thanks for the link Mr.B 🙂

    • June 22, 2012 at 1:30 pm

      i need a new incarnation now !!!!

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