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A Perfect Life…With You

Nothing I can hold onto
everything just passess through me.
without your gentle touch
I am not the man I wanna be.
Can’t see ย shining or dark
things in front of me.
I live to feel your breath,
closer to you, I am free.

I don’t wanna live forever
but I wanna live it with you.
I don’t know what my God looks like,
but I know he lives in you.


I know what forever means.

I lived it,
when I loved you.

  1. June 23, 2012 at 9:45 am

    Upload a picture of you and suhani no! I am sure people want to see you. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • June 23, 2012 at 9:54 am

      no wayyy !
      it’ll be hoor and langoor !!!

      • June 23, 2012 at 10:00 am

        Aisa kuch nahi hai. And you know it!!

  2. June 23, 2012 at 10:23 am

    Very Beautiful.. the poetry and bhabhi ji.. but not in same order ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. June 23, 2012 at 11:59 am

    The intensity of the feelings and the life in her existence can be felt very strongly..God bless you both..Lovely to see your reflection here ..Gorgeous!

    • June 23, 2012 at 12:03 pm

      thanks Soumya !
      She is my everything…she would never speak of her sacrifices and dreams – but I have to know them to know her..

  4. June 23, 2012 at 1:43 pm

    so this is your suhani? she is sweet looking girl ๐Ÿ™‚
    fabulous, heartfelt poem of true, deep love.

    • June 23, 2012 at 1:46 pm

      thanks Sharmishtha…ya, she is a strong lady and well informed too..
      did I tell you that my elder daughter’s name is “Mishthi” ? ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • June 23, 2012 at 2:02 pm

        thats a bengali name. my niece’s pet name is mishtu

      • June 23, 2012 at 4:25 pm

        yup…I am too fond of anything meetha…so the name… ๐Ÿ˜‰

  5. June 23, 2012 at 11:27 pm

    Beautiful words of love.

    • June 24, 2012 at 8:38 am

      thanks a ton for dropping by ! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  6. preety92
    June 24, 2012 at 12:17 pm

    Beautiful word full with love and feelings! and your wife looks so sweet.. Archana is right. Upload a pic of you both! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • preety92
      June 24, 2012 at 12:17 pm


  7. Asifa Zunaidha
    June 24, 2012 at 6:29 pm

    Bhabhi is very beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚ Take care.. Khudha bachaye buri nazar se ๐Ÿ™‚

    • June 25, 2012 at 9:09 am

      Inshaallah ! thanks Asifa ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Asifa Zunaidha
    June 24, 2012 at 6:34 pm

    If it’s true that she had dreams that had to be sacrificed, you could still help them come true, when ur own girls have grown up and the nest becomes empty… A woman’s identity is unique, more than a wife, daughter and mother, and it has to be carved by herself at some point in life… who better to understand that than her own man ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. June 25, 2012 at 11:17 am

    kya baat…kya baat!!

  10. Midnighthues
    June 26, 2012 at 10:29 am

    Lovely thoughts and beautiful lady! God bless!

    • June 27, 2012 at 6:02 pm

      thank you ma’am ! ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. June 29, 2012 at 10:06 pm

    sweet ๐Ÿ™‚

    • June 29, 2012 at 10:09 pm

      Thanks Vimal !
      Thanks for dropping by !!

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