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God Dies In My Diminishing Sense


 

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Just me and my honest confession of being a soul with his own weaknesses, vulnerabilities and dilemmas.

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Effortless denial

consolidate into worthlessness.

Ripping the core of innocent faith.

          Embraced prudence

          prey upon the rightness.

          Dreams serve as deceitful bait.

 

Requested demise

in synchronized numb wounds.

Promises still kept in the ashes.

          Vigorous palpitations

          in sleepless unconsciousness.

          Memories just revive the gashes.

 

Disgraceful confessions

build a hollow, exaggerated life.

Pleasing signatories of corrupt intelligence.

          Hostile judgments

          expel the wealth of rebirth.

          God dies in my diminishing sense.

           

 

 

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  1. August 20, 2012 at 12:23 am

    Ah! Honesty at its best.
    🙂
    A theist would be able to relate more, though.

    • August 20, 2012 at 12:26 am

      who cares about God…the one who lives forever without knowing hunger and failure…right ?

      • August 20, 2012 at 12:41 am

        I actually think that the opposite would be true-er.
        🙂

      • August 20, 2012 at 12:46 am

        Read the above comment as :

        Who cares about God (who lives forever without knowing hunger and failure)…right ?

      • August 20, 2012 at 12:57 am

        Ah! I better not stay stuff here.

  2. August 20, 2012 at 10:04 am

    amazing ..nice one wow …..it’s seems like i m reading a poem of some well known poet…..gud jawb!!

    • August 20, 2012 at 10:37 am

      Overwhelming comment..still in awe of your appreciation…thank you Prakshi

      • August 20, 2012 at 10:46 am

        welcome !!

  3. Kharma
    August 21, 2012 at 2:29 pm

    You’re brilliant.

    • August 21, 2012 at 4:26 pm

      your footsteps !

      • August 21, 2012 at 7:48 pm

        Hardly. Lol. Hardly. Quite inspirational…..love reading your stuff before I begin to write.

      • August 21, 2012 at 8:10 pm

        Thank You

  4. August 22, 2012 at 5:04 pm

    Deep expression of deeper emotions.
    “Promises still kept in the ashes”….and yes there are so many.
    “Dreams serve as deceitful bait”…again yes definitely and unfortunately.
    Stong and amazing use of words. Two thumbs up!

    • August 22, 2012 at 5:16 pm

      I’m taking both of the “thumbs” home !
      You find new ones !! 🙂
      Thank You so much !!

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