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Before God Realizes He Failed


Yes, we as a dominant race, are surely not moving towards perfection. What makes the things even worse is that so many existences rely upon the deeds we undertake.

Many people are working to make this world a better place to live. They just need more hands to work along with.

Also, I salute you beautiful bloggers who take time to spread the joy of sharing and creating a space to cherish this moment called life.

 

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I don’t want this world of yours

Presumed comforts in lost paths.

Take this hate back from inside me.

Your justice smells of biased wraths.

 

How you tamper the soul of the truth.

That conspicuous numbness in fake smiles.

Deprived senses of honesty and significance.

Memories stuffed as junk in the files.

 

Walking over the meaning of just.

Coagulated existence of hearts infected.

The blood on your conscience is a debt.

You were the best, so long HE protected.

 

Raise me a new hope, if you can,

and some air that does not smell stale.

Time may just be running out, fast.

Soon before God realizes that he failed.

 

 

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  1. August 31, 2012 at 7:33 pm

    I have a pragmatic view towards life, from reading a lot about the past I guess. Nothing has changed through out the history of the world. Only new players, new labels. But sometimes once or twice one event or person surprises me and gives me hope that this world is worth living in. Nothing so bad had happen to me personally but I am not insensitive to the suffering of others. I also salute people who are able to release themselves from apathy and actually do something for the betterment of others or the world without a taint of personal agenda.

    • August 31, 2012 at 8:26 pm

      Hey Jofelyn
      Thank you for your honest words.

  2. August 31, 2012 at 7:39 pm

    This is beautiful in a very sacred manner.. I love this post! I wonder if we ever will let the evil out of our soul to let the goodness rule with dominance..
    Thank you for sharing!
    -Naima.

    • August 31, 2012 at 8:29 pm

      ..and your gave it a more pious feel with these sacred thoughts of your. Thank you

      • August 31, 2012 at 8:31 pm

        You’re always welcome 🙂
        -Naima.

  3. August 31, 2012 at 8:23 pm

    God failed?
    We failed God?
    God failed us?

    Who knows?
    🙂

    • August 31, 2012 at 8:30 pm

      when all would be done…only God will judge us.
      ..so God does know

  4. August 31, 2012 at 11:34 pm

    even in the darkest clouds,
    when storm of hypocrisy ravages,
    my soul still shines with truth,
    spreading the smile eternally! 🙂

    A very honest intense post by you!

  5. September 1, 2012 at 1:12 am

    nice one! the story does not get lost in the metered verses.

    • September 1, 2012 at 11:45 am

      Thanks Neil ! 🙂

  6. drsuraiyanasim
    September 1, 2012 at 2:25 pm

    God never fails.
    We have failed Him.
    Oh how we have disappointed Him when i am sure He expects us to become better for our sake only.
    Foe now Prashant, this is my most fav poem on your blog.
    It’s the way you have written it…it’s powerful, hard-hitting, insightful…and it will make us ponder.
    I usually have fav lines in every poem but it was damn hard choosing here coz every line has so much depth and meaning. Love the first stanza beyond words… It connects like nothing else.

    • September 1, 2012 at 4:29 pm

      Hi Doc !
      Well, what can I can say.
      This has to be the fav comment on my blog ! 😉

      • drsuraiyanasim
        September 1, 2012 at 10:27 pm

        That’s very kind of you …..if u are not kidding 😉
        I am humbled!

      • September 1, 2012 at 10:59 pm

        ask my wife then !! 🙂

      • drsuraiyanasim
        September 2, 2012 at 12:07 am

        Suhani is that true??? 😀

  7. September 2, 2012 at 9:17 pm

    Wow! A highly prominent as well as explicit post, Prashant. 🙂 🙂

    Rahul

    • September 2, 2012 at 10:32 pm

      Thanks Rahul…glad to see you back !

  8. September 21, 2012 at 8:25 pm

    Love to wonder, this is wonder-full. I wonder if god and his brother argue over who is running the world right, and tossing a coin to see which strategy to try next. I wonder if Luci and Sat are his brothers. Which is in charge, there are lots of these guys, all with fadically different plans to achieve the same thing. ; ) Next plan might work. Ha ha.

    • September 21, 2012 at 8:55 pm

      there were gods..then came the demi gods and then the humans who challenged everything that god did !

      I wonder why god created so many of self-s !!!

      …moreover, he must be wondering why he created us !

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:00 pm

        I know right!
        Have you played multilayer online adventure games? It put this whole thing into some kind of perspective for me. I think he was bored. Doesn’t all trouble start out as fun? And maybe we are just a teenage culture. If we don’t kill ourselves and everything else, we may yet grow up and be great company. : ) We are wonderful and diverse even as we are despicable. : )

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:05 pm

        the problem is that we know that we are almost perfect ! That takes away the sense of appreciating the strength of life.

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:08 pm

        Interesting observation. Must be why we challenge ourselves so much by creating such dichotomy and seemingly unresolvable puzzles, like this one to integrate. Seems like you got a beautiful mind. Your daughters will be proud.

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:13 pm

        anything you say about my daughters…I am left spellbound and emotional !
        Thanks a ton !

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:14 pm

        : D

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:01 pm

        I know right!
        Have you played multilayer online adventure games? It put this whole thing into some kind of perspective for me. I think he was bored. Doesn’t all trouble start out as fun? And maybe we are just a teenage culture. If we don’t kill ourselves and everything else, we may yet grow up and be great company. : ) We are wonderful and diverse even as we are despicable. : ) You must be one of them demi.

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:10 pm

        Yes…I am one of the demi…’cas I would choose how life would go, shape up and end !! 🙂

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:12 pm

        you no like play? What is your definition of end?

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:15 pm

        end for me would be something personal. The end has to be a state of satisfaction, that you’ve done enough as a family member, as a friend and as a human being and as a lover. The end must not be abrupt or begged for. End is the beginning of a state of completion.
        And when everything will end…not God..but only my love would judge me !

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:20 pm

        Isn’t your end/heave fulfillment the same one by you as poetically described different by every prophet poet, philosopher, lover ever? Yet unique to you, and irreplaceable priceless, like fatherhood. As if you didn’t know you are not the only father in the world, and yet..nothing beats your own. Some of us will never be a father. : ) You make me want to! lol

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:23 pm

        love is always the same…so is the fulfillment in life you spoke about…the difference is that it is my life and that is theirs. None of us is the first one..but the personal feel of the situation is first, fresh and everlasting for us personally.

        You talk magic..thank you !

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:29 pm

        You talk like God. ; )

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:36 pm

        you see and acknowledge his presence in us mortals – you’re the one bestowed with his conscience and the eye of kindness !
        Happy Blogging

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:51 pm

        You speak of us all.

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:56 pm

        🙂

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:21 pm

        Isn’t your end/heave fulfillment the same one by you as poetically described different by every prophet poet, philosopher, lover ever? Yet unique to you, and irreplaceable priceless, like fatherhood. As if you didn’t know you are not the only father in the world, and yet..nothing beats your own. Some of us will never be a father. : ) You make me want to! lol When your girls are teens, you may feel like you have failed. But you and god will get over it…just a thought….

      • September 21, 2012 at 9:25 pm

        Amen

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