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When You Leave My Dreams



So many times

I’ve broken down

and did not let it show.

            You need to be there,

            holding me as one.

            You’re my only glow.


There is a heart inside

which stops to breathe

when you leave my dreams.

            Believe my wish

            and see in my eyes,

            lays a soul that gleams.


If I can’t live just once more,

would you be there when it all seizes.

Or I’ll just be here, waiting for you,

wishing this last breath of mine freezes.    



  1. September 25, 2012 at 3:25 pm

    this is so moving Prasant. You’ve beautifully managed to capture the pain…

    • September 25, 2012 at 4:05 pm

      I wish if all the pain in this world could be captured and thrown somewhere to never return.
      Thanks for the support !

      • September 25, 2012 at 4:10 pm

        oh why! how true, you spoke my mind. How really i wish for a world where there existed no pain at all… be it physical or mental, for humans or for any other living being… if wishes were horses, i guess, i would be riding them! 🙂

      • September 25, 2012 at 4:38 pm

        I would pray with your words.

      • September 25, 2012 at 4:39 pm

        Thanks Prashant 🙂

      • September 25, 2012 at 4:41 pm

        Happy Blogging

  2. September 25, 2012 at 5:25 pm

    Sorrow, brings depth.
    It is joy that is shallow.

    Lets face it. None of us would be who we are had it not been for pain, loss and sorrow.
    Rejoicing with em, is what makes you who you are, Prashant.

    • September 25, 2012 at 5:40 pm

      Totally agree….pain is a must to be known but not worth living with !

  3. September 25, 2012 at 5:51 pm

    this is beautiful 🙂

    • September 25, 2012 at 6:49 pm

      Just went adorable !
      Thank you

  4. September 25, 2012 at 10:21 pm

    God never promised us a rose garden – but when we find ourselves in one, we can be sure the thorns are as prevalent as the beauty and the fragrance. I breath in the beauty of your words, Prashant, feel the love in your pain, and thank God for the thorns. Without them, there would be no roses!

    • September 26, 2012 at 3:31 am

      Must know it…must not live in it though ma’am !

  5. September 25, 2012 at 11:34 pm

    Another lovely and touching poem for your lovlier wife.
    “The is a heart which stops to breathe when you leave my dreams”…so tender and genuine.

    • September 26, 2012 at 3:28 am

      You are kind like always ! Thanks doc !

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  7. seethroughmymask
    October 14, 2012 at 11:59 pm

    Heartbreak is the worst pain. I’m still waiting to feel normal again. But as time moves on, so must I. This too shall pass.

    • November 2, 2012 at 8:08 pm

      heart never breaks…..its our will that stops complimenting the might of our heart !

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