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Being Her

Women around us, in our societies, in our workplaces and even in our homes get treated in a demeaning manner.

Do we seek to make a better world without giving respect to our ladies ?

Broken flutes orchestrate a perfect symphony.
A tattered shroud masks the sorrows untamed.
Flowerets shiver in the cold sun masked by smoke.
For her conspicuous dreams – is she to be blamed?

Daubing her skin away from the acidic prejudice
and the sightless hunger for the innocence of her kind.
She works in a yard with the prominent in prey 
as the quivering worth of a woman goes to the blind.

With a muted applause from her callous apprentices,
she carries bouquets of smiles covering her sores.
Alive in her own story of a life beyond the tale.
She hides our guiltless shame beneath her toes.

  1. September 10, 2013 at 2:45 pm

    Nicely knitted…

    Peace & Light

    • October 13, 2013 at 7:06 pm

      Peace and light !
      Happy Blogging !

  2. September 11, 2013 at 12:42 am

    a bow to your words of excellent and touching expressions. The last line rules the poem and the heart.

  3. September 19, 2013 at 11:35 pm

    In the first stanza, what do you think of replacing the “ing” verbs for straight present tense (mask…shiver…)? You might compare the sounds.
    “Alive in her own story of a life beyond the tale.”

    Why toes – not feet?

    I just might have dedicated my recent MMA post to you LOL if not for the thanks I had for the coaches. You’re one of the very few readers I can talk MMA with.

    • October 7, 2013 at 6:00 am

      Done as you suggested !

      ..and yes..MMA anytime..mat or no mat..just give the cue !

      • October 7, 2013 at 8:14 am

        Well, if u wanna talk it and missed them, there’s an MMA poem (yes, such a thing) 90 Seconds on the Round and the ART of WAR post (Part 1 of new series).

      • October 7, 2013 at 1:35 pm

        Now I too need to write a poem on mma !

      • October 7, 2013 at 10:30 pm

        LOL go for it. But remember, I was first he he he. And I did it as a woman. 😉

      • October 8, 2013 at 8:13 am

        Then I’ll be your second..champ !

  4. October 4, 2013 at 4:59 pm

    the best way to describe her..very well written!

    • October 7, 2013 at 5:57 am

      She..needs no descriptions though !
      Thanks for dropping by !

  5. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    October 13, 2013 at 9:11 pm

    your thoughts go within the depths of human conscientious
    giving a voice to what is within the highest intent of love…
    Take Care…You Matter…

    • October 13, 2013 at 9:16 pm

      …and most motivating our your words of support ! Thank you.

      • LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
        October 13, 2013 at 9:17 pm

        you are very welcome…
        the Thank you is mutual…

      • October 14, 2013 at 8:02 am

        Graceful as always

    • November 6, 2013 at 7:05 pm

      Thank you for your sincere support !

  6. November 13, 2013 at 8:28 pm

    Only the person concerned knows what pain is given by the hapless and inhuman animal in the guise of a person that inspid person is! May he rot on the pires of hell not only this life but all the lives put together. God may bestow new emotional upsurge of warmth for ever and ever till eternity to the hapless one. When God is with the helpless one that person is liberated for good.

    • December 9, 2013 at 8:00 pm

      The honesty in your heart reflects in you words…thanks Harbans

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